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Why “Great, let me think about it” should really really scare you … and how to respond September 29th, 2011

Through your perseverance, determination and great emailing, you finally land an appointment with a prospect during your sales blitz. You walk in with your sales collateral and “goodies” and after a few awkward moments of small talk (Oh, your granddaughter is adorable, um, that’s my youngest daughter or something less embarrassing but just as inauthentic), you launch into your sales pitch. You, of course, leave time (or at least you think you do) for questions at the end. During the appointment, your prospect takes several calls (you insist, of course) though she seems entirely engaged with your presentation, smiling and laughing and even adding her own comments. You finish and ask for those questions and she says, “You know, I really don’t have any. It sounds good and I have another meeting to get to. Let me think about it and I’ll get back to you.”

Okay. Okay! At tomorrow’s sales meeting, you’ll have something to report.

But what? Because she said she had another meeting, it would have been disrespectful to continue to probe. On the other hand, this one simple thought will change everything: Take back control.

I’d say, “Thank you for letting me know that it sounds good and that you have another meeting. I’m delighted you’re interested in (fill in your blank here – but not about your product or service, about the benefit she’ll receive) in helping your team feel confident when they prospect, with tools that help them grow business. If we don’t connect (give an ample amount of time) within the next few weeks, I’ll follow-up with you then. Thanks again.”

By taking back control, I don’t feel weird, or have to come up with some devious scheme to have a reason to call back. I can get on the phone or start the email with,” Hi Name, As promised, I’m following up…”

I also could have asked for her commitment to my call back. I could have said, …I’ll follow up with you then. Will that be okay?” If you ask that, though, be prepared, just in case she tries to take back control by saying, “Oh, that’s okay. I appreciate it but I’ll call you back when we’re ready.” (If this happens, you can always go back to, “Perfect. Thank you and if we don’t connect before the end of the year, I’ll stay in touch.”

Yes, there are about a million other things that could be done to make that sales call better. Here are a few:
-Upgrade your sales presentation into a sales conversation
-Leave the goodies home and send them as a follow-up with a handwritten note
-Be prepared with how you’ll start the meeting (you control it!) by knowing what small talk you’ll use (if any) and how you’ll transition into your business conversation (hint: make it about their time and be real!)

Want more? I’d be honored to learn more about your company to see if I can help you create winning sales conversations. From email prospecting to F2F sales conversations, How to Say it to Sell it determines your sales success. Master your sales conversations and you sky rocket your success.

7 things you didn’t know email could do for you September 26th, 2011

A client/friend and I had a great conversation today about the need for his sales team to pick up the phone. “They just won’t do it,” he said. And maybe that’s okay.

It’s true that an email – even a great email – can’t convey the tone and depth of passion for the other person’s success. But well-crafted email sales messages can:
1. Start a trusting relationship.
2. Build profitable relationships.
3. Move a person to action.
4. Create an opening for a phone call.
5. Demonstrate your professionalism as a sales person.
6. Clue the prospect that you won’t waste his/her time.
7. Be much more efficient than a phone call.

So how do you get your emails to do all that for you?
1. Be authentic and truthful. If the only way you know them is that they did business with your company some time in the past decade, tell them. Of course, you don’t have to tell them that the sales person before you left you lousy notes or that you have no idea if they were happy with your company, etc. You can say: Awhile back, you ordered widgets from ABC and since then we’ve added X to them to ensure they are Y and Z. I’ll plan to phone you Friday to see if the addition of X might help ensure you achieve F and G.

2. Build profitable relationships by staying in touch. But don’t write to say you’re checking in, or touching base, because you aren’t. You’re writing to stay in touch because you care about their success. Simple and truthful. Tell them.

3. If you want to move a person to action, be clear in what you want and give them a reason to take it or do it. Saying: I’ll call you Thursday, isn’t enough. Saying: I’ll call you Thursday to discuss new options to help you achieve F and G is specific and motivating because it’s about them.

4. Let them know you’ve done your research. You’re not emailing (or phoning) to see if they use widgets or have a need because you’ve checked their website and know the answer to both.

Help them to see you respect their time and you’ll be likely to get them to do the same for you.

2 Easy Email Changes to Sell More September 21st, 2011

What are the first and second things you look at when you read an email? Absolutely. You check who sent it and then you read the subject line. If both of those items are relevant to you, then you’re likely to read whatever portion of the message you can see in Preview. If the email passes that test, you open it, but wait… you probably don’t yet read it. More likely, you’re scanning the message and scrolling as you read. Only if it appears to truly be relevant, do you go back to the top to read the message.

What can you do then to sell more? Here are 2 easy tips to apply:
1. Create a compelling subject line.
•Put the most important words to your recipient first (so even if she is reading on her mobile device, she’ll still see it).
•Make the subject line action oriented but not pushy. Use: Action request, Confirmation or Call request not Read me, Action required or Urgent.
•Align the subject line with the email content. (Make sure the subject line accurately reflects what the email is about.)
•Don’t go overboard with excitement. There is a fine line between truth and cheese. Don’t cross it.

2. Write a first sentence that matters to the recipient.
•Focus on what matters most to the customer and begin with it.
•Forget the “warm welcome” and start by providing content the reader will feel warm about. Instead of starting with drivel like: Thank you for considering the ABC company for …, start with: Wait until you see the updates at ABC!
•If you feel like you must begin with something like: Greetings from ABC! Type it. Then, as you proof your message before you send it, delete that sentence. You’ll be amazed how often your second sentence is strong and reader focused.

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Do your sales presentations suck? They might if… September 19th, 2011

With a nod to Jeff Foxworthy, your sales presentations might suck if:

•You think starting with good-morning-so glad-to-be-here-thanks-for-giving-us-this-opportunity is a smart way to open.
•You think the more words and numbers you can put on a powerpoint slide the more likely you are to wow ‘em with your knowledge.
•You have to ever say “I’m sorry” about anything – running longer than you promised, having waaaaay too many slides, not having enough collateral, videos that don’t play, slides that are wrong or that you had a hard, long or no night.
•You think the presentation is about you and your company.
•You think they are as interested in what you have to say as you are.
•You think you can just talk at them without engaging them.
•You think you can deliver a great sales presentation without great preparation.
•You think you can tap dance your way around answers you don’t know.
•You even try to tap dance around an answer you don’t know.
•Enthusiasm isn’t you so you don’t show any.
•You’re happy when they have no questions.
•You’re thrilled when they say they’re going to think about it and get back to you.
•Really, you wouldn’t use Powerpoint except that everyone else does.
•You “personalize” your presentation by changing your title slide.
•You ask everyone to please turn off their smart phones (because you think they’ll be smarter if they glue their eyes to you).
•You like showing participants what they don’t know.
•You enjoy talking over people.
•You still think a sales presentation is the most important part of closing the sale.

Okay, so they aren’t funny but they are true. What can you add? Your presentation might suck if…..

4 must know tips to get your emails read September 15th, 2011

So the word on the street is that no one reads email anymore. I heard a speaker just Tuesday make that silly claim again.

Here is what he should have said: No one reads irrelevant, inauthentic emails anymore. Or, he could have said that no one reads long, rambling emails. He would have been totally right-on had he said that no one reads emails that say nothing new, are copied to too many people, are all about the writer, are negative, incomplete or boring. Had he said that no one reads emails that show little respect for the recipient he would have been perfectly spot on.

Apply these 4 must know tips to ensure your emails are read:

1. Skip the parts they will. Long emails get deleted or archived (we archive them as C.O.O.A [Cover Our Own Assets] because we don’t have time to read them and are concerned we might actually be missing something important!).

Leave out every bit of information that matters only to you. Use hyperlinks so they can learn more, if they want to. Including everything in an email – because it just might be of interest to them – is a sign of desperation. Honor their time and you may earn the right to tell them more.

2. Don’t be a tease. Take control of the next step. Ending an email or a proposal without including a clear, specific next step is like sniffing great wine and not getting to sip it.

3. Be smart. “Elevating” an email by copying your prospect’s boss may seem like a great idea, particularly if the boss appeared interested and the situation isn’t moving anywhere. Making your prospect – the person you’re dealing with – look bad or negligent isn’t going to help win her over. Help others feel smart doing business with you.

4. Sell what you have, not what you don’t. In email, it’s critically important to say what you can do – what is possible – before saying what isn’t. Successful sales people always look for the opportunity to solution sell, and email is no exception.

Apply these 4 tips and your emails will not only be read, they’ll be acted upon.

What else is important to consider when writing a compelling message? Tell us what you always include, or omit, to ensure your buyers are happy to seen your mail in their inbox.

3 email bloopers that cost sales September 13th, 2011

A reviewer commented that one of the most important chapters in the Second Edition of Power Sales Writing is the one about digital manners (aka email etiquette). He said that most sales people forget how easy it is to (mis) judge someone who doesn’t pay attention to the details. So here are the 3 things that annoy customers the most:

1. A high-priority flag. Unless the buyer asked you to flag your email to her as a high-priority message, don’t do it. It’s not only ego-centric (look at this important message, it’s from important me) but it’s rude, too. Why would your sales message be the most high-priority thing in her box? Marking your message urgent is annoying and dumb business.

2. A demanding subject line. Subject lines should be authentic and relevant. Like a headline on a newspaper article or blog post, they should be intriguing and truthful. If, for instance, your message tells your reader that you’ll call next Friday, one appropriate option for your subject line could be: Action request: Call Friday. It would not be appropriate, though, to say: URGENT! or even Urgent. Two other really annoying choices are:
Action Required
READ ME

And while we’re on subject lines, avoid the word: Reminder. You can almost be guaranteed that your reader won’t open your message when you use that word in the subject line. Why? It indicates you think the recipient forgot something important. Use “Follow-up” as a better choice.

3. Read receipts. The only reason to add a Read Receipt is if you think your customer will pretend he didn’t get your message. Yes, I know you have important contracts to send and you want to be sure the recipient got it. If you feel you must include the Read Receipt, tell your reader that you added it – and why you did. (If you can’t think of a reason better than because I don’t really trust you, you’re probably better off not adding the RR.) Or, pick up the phone and ask. The early bird may get the worm, but the sneaky one will go hungry.

What digital manners do you wish everyone applied? What should people stop doing to be less annoying?

If you write it, will they read it? September 7th, 2011

Just reading 35 Interesting Statistics About Email and can’t help but be curious how they got their research. Whatever. That isn’t really my point here. The “fact” that they say that “74 percent of adults online prefer using email for communication” is.

If we say that we prefer using email, does that mean we prefer responding by email, receiving email or both? And if we like – or at least 74% of us online – like using email, what do we like about it? I get emails I like and emails that I definitely don’t like. But really that isn’t the point either.

Here it is: Just because people say they prefer using email doesn’t mean they or we read everything we get. Emails have to be carefully and thoughtfully crafted to encourage a reader to give up his or her precious time to read our message. The more respect we can extend to the reader; the more clear, concise and relevant we can make it, the more likely it is that people who like reading email will like reading ours.

What do you think? Do you prefer email? Why? What do you like?

The Persuasive Email: 3 Quick Tips September 5th, 2011

If you could change one thing about the way other people write emails, what would it be?

When I ask that question during my sales writing workshops, I hear everything from:
be concise
answer all my questions
don’t make me guess which email you’re responding to
change the subject line so I can find the message later
put your phone number where I can easily tap it
don’t send me stuff I don’t need to read

Advice: Do what you want others doing and don’t do what you don’t.

More than that though, a pattern emerges. The key to being persuasive in email is to respect the other person. The more you value his or her time, the more focused you are on his or needs and expectations, the more persuasive you’ll be.

3 quick tips

Tip #1: Cut words. (My first draft of this post said, “Cut out words.” Really.) When checking your email, see which words can be cut. The more concise the message, the more likely your reader is to read – and respond.

Tip #2: Eliminate the parts they don’t read. Providing all sorts of information about your product or idea might be what you want to do but will they care about everything you dump out? The moment they start skimming your message (for the stuff that interests them) is the nanosecond you start losing their trust and the sale. Use hyperlinks to get them to the part of your website that will most help them.

Tip #3: When prospecting, aim for 4 sentences.
Use sentence #1 to explain how they might be more successful because of your idea.
Sentence #2 explains further.
Sentence #3 asks for/explains the next step.
Sentence #4 reminds them of how they’ll benefit.

Here is an example:
Hi Name (yes, please use a greeting such as “Hi”)
Your dog is family to you and if you’re like most dog owners, you’d do just about anything to keep him or her happy. With ABC (ABC would be hyperlinked), if your dog could smile and say thank you, it would!
I’ll call you Tuesday afternoon to talk about how you can feel confident your dog is smiling (at least on the inside).
Wait until you hear how simple it is to feel totally confident about your dog’s happiness.

Okay so that was for a bogus ABC product and because of that it may seem inauthentic. (It is…it’s for a bogus product!) But if you’re like most sales professionals, you’ll quickly get the point about how you can write a more persuasive email. (Consider what isn’t there, too.)

What subject line would you use for that email to get your message opened? If you don’t want to wait for a later post, check out my new expanded and updated Power Sales Writing: Second Edition book. Subject lines and about 120 more tips are included!

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